Help me to improve support texts

Hi,
under the hood the wizard now is quite finished. But as I'm not a native English speaker I need your help at improving the support texts given inside the wizard.

They are, as Robert stated a bit to formal and stiff.

I really would be glad if some of you could have a look at the wiki page, where you can edit the texts.

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